Ampersandcastles

Let’s build ampersandcastles
on a moat that’s made of words
with turrets turning clauses
where the arrowslits are heard

and a drawbridge joining predicates
from subjects made of stone
that punctuate the pillars
of the stories we call “home.”

2 responses to “Ampersandcastles

  1. Reblogged this on thom dunn and commented:

    New post on Five By Five Hundred, about….well, I’m not sure, but the title sounded cool anyway so I just kind of went with it.

  2. Great wordplay and rhythm the rhyme is sharp without feeling forced.

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